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19 June 2003 @ 10:01 Memories
Coming Together - HP ficlette - Harry/Draco  
Title: Coming Together
Author: Beren (aka Didi)
Part: 1/1
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books, and Warner Bros., Inc. No money is being made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Genre: Slash
Summary: Draco finds out something about Harry James Potter that changes everything.
Author's Notes: Rated R for nakedness and kissing.
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anthgrrl on 29th September 2004 03:25 (UTC)
Aww!

<<“Shssh, it will be alright,” Draco said, strangely capable and calm, “I won’t let you go.”>>

What a sweet Draco! I like...a multiple personality story could be really dark, but I really dig what you've done with it-- Cheers!
Beren: weirdberen_writes on 29th September 2004 04:05 (UTC)
Re: Aww!
Thank you. I think under the spoilt, whiney exterior there is a sweet and charming Draco trying to get out ;).
starlolliestarlollie on 24th November 2004 19:28 (UTC)
wow that was really good. ugh poor Harry all that crashing into you all at one like that. God Dracos and angel for holding him during that.
Beren: madness/loveberen_writes on 7th January 2005 07:54 (UTC)
Thank you, so pleased you enjoyed it. It must have been quite a shock; like learning your whole life in one moment.
nolovetoday on 6th January 2005 21:49 (UTC)
I think I fell in love with your story
I've read that story a long time ago, and now that I found it again, I feel...
THAT IT REALLY NEEDS A SEQUEL!!

I'd like to know how the new merged Harry will be perceived by Dumbledore; I want to know about Harry and Draco's coming out and the reactions of his friends; I want to read about Draco keeping Harry together (Is that correct English?)...

Au boulot, Beren!!
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 7th January 2005 07:53 (UTC)
Re: I think I fell in love with your story
There is a partially written sequel which I really must finish at some point. I became stuck on one scene and until I know how to complete it I'm a little shafted.

Thank you for the comment, I'm so pleased you enjoyed the fic.
(Anonymous) on 8th January 2005 04:17 (UTC)
WOW
Oh dear... this is it! I have now made you my number one HARRY POTTER fanfic author. You are so incredible! The ideas... the characterizing... the fluency! You are a gift from God! GARGH!
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 10th January 2005 08:47 (UTC)
Re: WOW
Thank you very much, I'm flattered.
Jolandephoegan_leisha on 14th February 2005 16:28 (UTC)
Love it, completely
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 28th February 2005 09:16 (UTC)
Thank you, so pleased it entertained you.
meta_piter on 28th February 2005 13:27 (UTC)
WOW! I've no suitable words in English to say how match I like this story! It's really great! Thanks...:)
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 28th February 2005 13:33 (UTC)
Thank you very much, so pleased you liked it.
Only slightly neurotic.xingou on 14th March 2005 10:10 (UTC)
ahhh

ahhhhhh
Only slightly neurotic.xingou on 14th March 2005 10:13 (UTC)
sorry about the incoherentness
(no subject) - beren_writes on 15th March 2005 07:22 (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - xingou on 15th March 2005 17:08 (UTC) (Expand)
Nevnevcolleil on 15th March 2005 01:49 (UTC)
Once again you've taken an oft-used idea and made it entirely your own. A multiple personality fic where both personalities are likeable for their own reasons, where there's happiness even when they're separate, and hope when they're together. This is wonderful.
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 15th March 2005 07:22 (UTC)
Thank you, very glad you liked Harry's personalities and the fic.
kohlkinkykohlkinky on 9th April 2005 14:17 (UTC)
Mrowr. That was... wow. Way more plausible than it ought ever to be, and that Harry's alter-ego was called James is poignant and very fitting. Harry James Potter. Draco's reactions were really nicely written, and the end made me go: 'Aww!'
I really loved this. Sequel! =3
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 20th April 2005 07:19 (UTC)
Thank you, so pleased you like it. I really must finish the sequel at some point - I became stuck in the middle of it and still haven't finished it.
Not tacky, just delusional: blackxxskiestotally_loca on 16th April 2005 19:23 (UTC)
Meepiful! This make me all tingly inside. It's so beautiful. I think I've read it about ten times so far and it's still not old. Thank you so much.
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 20th April 2005 07:20 (UTC)
Thank you :). I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it.
firefly820firefly820 on 22nd April 2005 18:39 (UTC)
I read this story about a week ago, but I didn't have time to comment on it. I'm going through today and commenting to your stories (1's I'm reading today and the 1's I read in the past).

I'm really thinking I might ave to poke the bunny with a stick again to get it to complete the sequel to this one...split personality Harry never occured to me before, but with everthing he's been through I can see where it could've happened. I stand by what I've said before....U R an awesome writer!!!!!!!!!
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 5th September 2005 07:12 (UTC)
Thank you. So sorry it took me this long to reply - I have 900 emails in my inbox that I've managed to get behind on, so I'm starting to go through them now.
inthefire2002 on 1st July 2005 17:57 (UTC)
Wow, I really liked this. *grin* It was funny when James said that he had stolen all of Harry's hormones :)

*sniff* The part at the end where Draco held Harry/James as they reintegrated was so moving. I could tell that Draco truly cared what was happening and had fallen in love too.

I look forward to you getting past your writer's block on this one.
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 5th September 2005 07:13 (UTC)
Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed the fic, it was one of my first two HP plot bunnies.
The Creativator: Harry Wept by myraravenpan on 21st July 2005 21:43 (UTC)
*cries* that was perfectly done. *amazed*
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 5th September 2005 07:13 (UTC)
Thank you.
Megandraco_luva on 26th August 2005 11:21 (UTC)
um...*drool*...that was...*cries*...and...*is awed*...and...wow.
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 5th September 2005 07:13 (UTC)
Thank you, I'm so very pleased you enjoyed it.
Meghanjadedwallflower on 4th September 2005 15:26 (UTC)
i've never heard or read this idea in any other hp fic. it works perfectly, and i'd give anything for you to continue this. i could see this kind of thing turning into a novel-length fic.

awesome job.
Beren: Remus Friendshipberen_writes on 5th September 2005 07:15 (UTC)
Thank you so much. It was inspired by the movie Identity and has been a subject I've been interested in for several years. I researched it a while back for an original project that never happened, so it was nice to use the research :).
thrnbrookethrnbrooke on 29th November 2005 21:57 (UTC)
Wow! That was fantastic!
(Anonymous) on 21st February 2006 01:30 (UTC)
darken
I do believe that it does deserve a sequal. I believe that these stories are very well and good. I sorry about the poor english, my village really only speaks gaelic.
closetidentity on 20th June 2006 02:24 (UTC)
Wow... another
Your ability to come up with plots is astounding... another one for my personal favorites list... which since you are the first person I ever read any kind of fanfic by... is like saying "HEY YOU I AM PUTTING YOU IN A ROOM WITH A BUNCH OF OTHER YOUS!" cause I haven't read anyone else's work yet... speaking of which, any suggestions?
dantes_titsdantes_tits on 21st June 2006 17:06 (UTC)
did you ever finish that sequel? I'd love to read it.
vee72: Emmavee72 on 9th July 2006 04:59 (UTC)
Fantastic story!!! I usually don't enjoy stories where there is different personalities etc.. but this one I definately enjoyed.
(Anonymous) on 22nd October 2006 16:38 (UTC)
Very interesting concept giving Harry a split personality. It makes sense in light of Harry's abusive childhood. Well done.

“Do I loose you forever?”

I can't help but point out that the correct word is lose not loose.
Wynter: loveperngirlie2000 on 23rd May 2008 23:12 (UTC)
I thought the same thing, but it would be really interesting to take it as "loose," meaning "set free." Rather more romantic than "lose," don't you think?
janae_twilightjanae_twilight on 26th December 2006 23:51 (UTC)
i just finished Angels and Devil and just had to read more of your fics. Coming Together is very sweet and this is an interesting way to portray Harry. he really does have a split personality when you think on some of things he's done abd what he's had to deal with in his life. now i'm off to gobble up as much of your writings as i can!
Vampyres and Space Cowboys! Oh My!ed_bb_cullen on 12th June 2007 23:01 (UTC)
yay for mentally unstable romance!
Yaaay!! Schitzo!Harry (sp. I'm sure) and Understanding!Draco! Props beren!!
mmecholeric on 28th July 2007 03:08 (UTC)
I'm pretty sure anything I say regarding this story hasn't already been said.

BUT I LOVED IT OMGWTFBBQ!!1!1!!ONE!!!11one!!!!SOGOOD!
(Anonymous) on 12th April 2008 02:35 (UTC)
Adorable. Absolutely adorable.
It's so cute. A little confusing at first, I have to admit, but good all the same. I love that Draco was such a sweet heart at the end. :D
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